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Insane!!

Wed May 24, 2006, 9:03 AM
just a poem i wrote today.... its screaming "PLEASE READ ME!!!"

Fluorescent streams
Where angels scream
For a link in time is lost.

Leaves falling
In repetitious mourning
For a love’s been betrayed, mistrust.

A silent journey
To last an eternity
For a glowing gem has been cracked!

Tears of metallic crimson blood
The innocent’s eyes slowly flood
The truthful mirror has shattered.

And then the shadows
Residing in the shallows
Of your gloomy, twisted heart.

You ripped me apart
You stole the beat of my heart
And now I’m the one who’s insane!

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:iconschizothymia:
it's beautiful.
i almost feel part of your pain, like i can relate.
not to mention, it makes me wanna beat the sh*t outa that person

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"i can imagine a peaceful world, a world filled with love and no war... and i can imagine attacking that world because no-one would expect it"
:iconmy-insentive:
lol thanks :)
:w00t:

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:iconpetertbexley:
Glittering words - you are a powerful poet.
It may be no consolation - but the pain of loss is one of the sharpest drivers of thought and art.
:iconmy-insentive:
thanks :)
it wasnt really loss though, well at the time i wrote it, it was more anger and frustration... so i lobbed a giant, heavy shoe at the person cos i had had enough.......

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Where You Find Peace Is Where You Find Him
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